How I became a writer Part XVIII
Title: How I became a writer
Part XVIII
Meg Rogers was one of the most versatile track athletes I
ever had on my team. She could long
jump, triple jump, and she was really good at high jump, almost winning
sectionals one year! Meg did the 400
relay for awhile, was a great 1600 relay runner, helping get a second place
finish at sectionals in 2016! Since she
was a flier in cheerleading I asked her to try pole vault and it turned out she
was decent at it! Although she never did
it in a meet, she did work at it for awhile, until finally sticking with
high jump. She was an awesome open 400
meter runner with an incredible stride for the first 200 meters followed by a
sprint to the finish! It was amazing to
watch! Although she never really ran
distance in track and field (she did do the steeple once for fun), Meg was an
excellent cross country runner, so she could have. I remember earlier in career her
practicing the hurdles but we used her in too many other places for that to be
a serious pursuit... which was an incredible irony.
What do I mean? Here
is the story of Meg’s hurdle career I wrote back in 2017 for her perspective
college coach. “Meg started her 100
hurdle career on May 8th and finished it on May 27th her
senior year, which is a little under three weeks. It all began four weeks out from May 27th
when Meg wanted to go to an invitational but she had prom that night. We looked through the program and I
recommended the open 400. She pointed out
that was close to her hair appointment time but could she do the steeplechase
for fun? Meg had done a lot for me over
the years. I’ve coached her through six
cross country seasons and four varsity girls track seasons (she had a mod coach
in track before me). I smiled and said,
“Sure.” She then wanted to know if we
should train for it. I laughed. “Meg,” I said, “You are a 400 relay and a 400
runner. We’ll just do this for
fun!” But then I sobered and said, “I
should probably work with you on hurdles a little though before you do
this.” So one night Meg and I headed
over to the hurdles. I’m like, “You’re
doing steeplechase, so we won’t worry about step count, so just hop this thing
and let’s see what you’ve got.” The last
time Meg had done the hurdles was the 55 in seventh grade and I think she did the 400
hurdles once or twice for me in ninth grade, so she had a rough idea what she
was doing. She jumped way over it. I was surprised and laughed. I said, “Hey, Meg, just for fun, let’s see
you do guy’s high hurdle height,” and jacked up the hurdle. Boom!
She went right over it with room to spare. I cranked it up to the fifth notch, guys
college height, and asked, “Just for kicks and giggles, can you clear
this?” She did easily. I joked with her that we should have been
training her in the hurdles sooner and told my wife and daughter about it but
that was about it.”
On Monday, the 8th of May, I was in school when Meg said, “Coach, could I talk to
you?” I’m like, "Sure," wondering what was
up. Meg has a defined tri-meet meet package
of 400 and 1600 relay, open 400, and high jump.
Because one of those teams was extremely tough, I dropped her out the open 400
to give Meg more gas in the 1600 relay, so I expected to talk about something
along those lines. She’s asked, “Can I do
the 100 hurdles on Tuesday?” Whatever I
expected, that was not it. The 100
hurdles? I already had three in that
category, one of them my daughter who was ranked in the top 10 of class D AND we were up against a very good team where my only goal was make our loss as
respectable as I could. Throwing away
one of my MVPs on a for fun event wasn’t high on the priority list. Besides I only had one night to train her!!! Yipe!!
There was a girl who had been dying to get into the 400 relay, Kaitlyn
Miles, and she was good off the blocks...but....I didn’t know. I told Meg I’d think about it.
I finally decided,
one, I was going to lose anyway, two, Meg had been with me a long time, and three,
she had done a lot for our program...why not?
Monday night she went down with the hurdle unit and went through hurdle
drills with them. My daughter wasn’t
down there because she was pole vaulting but the girls that were there knew
what they were doing and took care of Meg.
I came down after they ran through the basics and gave Meg my speech
about steps. I told her four step was
good but if she could three step that was even better. “Maybe you’ll be my first hurdle girl to
three step,” I told her glibly. By the
end of practice she was three stepping!!!!
I couldn’t believe it! So the
next night, without using blocks (because I was afraid of messing up her
rhythm) Meg was in the fast heat of the 100 hurdles. To get her in that heat I set up six hurdle
lanes (unusual for a small school tri-meet)!
She got her butt kicked BUT she didn’t do bad...no blocks, experience,
form, or leg snap she got a 20.4 hand time (20.64 officially). Could we get her into the sectional
meet? It would be a miracle. I prayed to God and got to work. The invitational that weekend (where she was
entered to do the steeple) I put her in the 100 hurdles too. Now in practice we added the blocks and used
a device called the form finder to work on getting her head down. She ran Saturday and got 20.1 FAT. (a half-second improvement!) In that race she leaped away from her heat in
the first few hurdles but couldn’t maintain it barely winning the heat. The county divisional meet was three days
later and she went 18.8 hand time! (a
drop another second!! Unheard of!!) That week we began to work on leg snap. I told her, “Meg you’re floating over the
hurdles, losing time! We have to fix
that!” It was so unfair to throw so many
concepts at her so fast, but Meg dutifully worked hard to master the leg snap
drill. At the county meet she and the
other hurdlers struggled (weather was colder) and she was still floating but
she managed a 19.3 hand time. I was
disappointed, not in Meg, but in knowing she would now be in the slow heat at
sectionals. Sectional week we worked
very hard on leg snap and getting low. I
told her to even have a chance she’d have to bury her heat. Meg did.
She scored a 18.93 FAT in the slow heat with no one to push her! I was very proud of that run. Meg got a ribbon, placing in the fast heat
from the slow heat with no one in her zip code!!”
What I did not tell that coach is that sectional week the
pain got so bad for Meg we had to ice bath her shins. Meg would do her short distance sprint
workout, go over to high jump, and then check in with me at hurdles. I would then run inside and fill a large
bucket with ice and water. She would sit
next to me on the scoring bleacher with both legs in the frigid water, while I
read her a children’s story. Yes, I
realize Meg was a senior but there are many incredible fairy tales out there
drawn by amazing artists like Trina Schart Hyman or profound books like “Oh,
the Places You’ll Go!” by the good doctor.
Meg was very brave! How do I
know? As a coach I ice bath when I’m in
heavy training. It is very painful and
the amount of ice Meg was dealing with was extremely painful! The ice regiment kept her on the firing
line...that and PRO KT tape.
What did the college coach think about Meg? She allowed Meg to join her DI track team and
Meg won MIP last year! I am very proud
of her!! I’ve often asked myself how I
could have missed that level of potential in Meg and have come to the
conclusion that earlier in her career her skill level hadn’t developed enough
to make it obvious. It should have
occurred to me later with Meg’s fast long stride and strong high jumping skills
but it did not. Now if I have a girl
doing those two things well I’m going to try them in the hurdles immediately...live
and learn I guess.
My writing was at the same point. I was ready to write my first novel but
unfortunately I picked a very complex concept that I wasn’t ready to write at
the time. Asylum was too complicated for
me at that time and was far beyond my skill level. My mom loved it and thought it had great
potential but I wasn’t so sure. The
first half read like a political thriller and the second half an action
adventure story. There were also a lot
of plot holes and things I wasn’t sure how to work in. Even though I had written over two hundred
pages and liked some of it very much, I did not have the skill to actually
write it at that moment. Like Meg early
in her track career, I did not yet possess the writing ability to handle such a
complex plot line. I would write ten
books before I went back to that early concept and it was still a struggle to
write it! I wrote all five Asylum books
at the same time and brought them out together!
I will NEVER do that again:)
Maybe:) How complex is the
series? Check this out. The recommended reading order is 1, 2, 3, 4,
and then zero book. BUT you can read the
story Zero, 1, 2, 3, 4 or zero, 2, 1, 3, 4 or 4, 1, 2, 3, zero or, well, you
get the idea:) The only good thing that
came out of the abortive attempt at my first novel was the confidence I could
actually write one now. I had many
different ideas for my first novel but which one should I choose?
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